Tuesday, January 14, 2014
Run on sentence help?
Run on sentence help?
Correct all run-on errors in the following paragraph. There are 5 errors. My friend, Miranda, is a junior majoring in government, and she plans to go to law school. Most law schools accept applicants from all majors, she thinks that majoring in government would help her prepare for law. All laws schools do require good grades and high score onthe LSAT. Her grades are high she has about at 3.8 GPA currently. She works very hard, she tudies more than any peron I know. She plans to take the LSAT this fall she will be studying for it on top of everything else. I admire her energy, I'm sure she has what it takes to be a good law student. Correct the following: 1. Collen called, she wants me to help her with her homework. 2. London was the first city to have a population of over one million, it reached that milestone in 1811. 3. My son wants to buy a snake, his mother is not happy about the idea. 4. The mascot for Yale is now a bulldog, its mascot over a hundred years ago was a cat. 5. Coloumbia was once considered part of South Amierca, its government decided in 1903 to proclaim Colombia was part of North America.
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My friend, Miranda, is a junior majoring in government; she plans to go to law school. Most law schools accept applicants from all majors. She thinks that majoring in government would help her prepare for law. All law schools do require good grades and a high score on the LSAT. Her are are high and she has about a 3.8 GPA currently. She works very hard- she studies more than any person I know. She plans to take the LSAT this fall and so she will be studying for it on top of everything else. I admire her energy and I'm sure that she has what it takes to be a good law student. You need to check your commas and add some periods. In some cases use a semi-colon. 1. Collen called; she wants me to help her with her homework. 2. London was the first city to have a population of over one million; it reached that milestone in 1811 As I'm going thru these all they need is a semi-colon. A semicolon punctuation mark used to separate two parts of a compound sentence when they are not connected by a conjunction.
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1. called;she 2. million: it These are all the same. You are joing two seperate complete sentnces . You have 3 options: . use a period and a capital......... snake.His . use a semi colon . use a conjunction.........bulldog, but its'............America , however its'
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